雅思作文范文30篇

雅思作文范文30篇

我事先先准备了30篇雅思作文的范文,不知道这样应付雅思写作考试够不够呢?

同学你好,我是北京新东方老师,其实雅思的作文需要平时的联系,你光准备30篇,没有经过自己的练习也是不行的。这种作文可以通过平时经验,积累自己的写作模板,到时候可以直接用,如果说作文素材的话,考雅思必须要学习的就是新概念四册,如果你英语水平不是很好,那学习一下新概念二册和三册也是非常必要的,因为如果你没有一定的英语基础综合知识,你是不会取得很高的成绩的!祝好!希望雅思取得好的成绩!

雅思作文 万能模版!!!???

2011雅思小作文写作万能模板
1、通过第一个曲线图,我们可以知道____,也说明了结果是___
According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that ______________.
2、一张有趣、有教育意义的、(内容)的图片(这句模板在雅思小作文中的应用非常的广泛。)
There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: __________.
3、当前有一张涉及______的增长曲线图,许多人______,然而其他人倾向于___
Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________, while others are inclined to ______________.
4、目前,共同之处是_________,许多人喜欢______因为_______除此之外还由于_____
Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like______________ because ______________. Besides, ______________.
5、(图表所示)_____,就像许多其他事物,被____更加喜爱,然而这一观点正被________所抨击,一些人认为_________,他们指出___________
______________, just like many other things, are preferred by ____________.
While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that ______________.
1 according to the chart“`
2 the date lead us to the conclusion that“`
3 the date show“`
4 the tree diagram reveals how“`
5 the figures show“`
6 this is a cure graph which describes the trend of“`
7 the pie graph depicts“`
8 the graph provides some interesting date regrarding“`
9 the table shows the changes in the number of “` over the period
from “`to “`
10 as is shown in the table “`
11 from the table ,we can clearly see that “`
12 this table shows the changing proportion of X and Y from “` to ““
13 the graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in“`
14 as can be seen from the grape ,the two curves show the flutuation of “`
15 over the period from “`to “`the“`remained level.
16 in the year between “`and “`.
17 in the 3 years spanning from 2005 through 2008.
18 the number of “` remained steady from “`to ““.
19 the number sharply went up to “`
20 the percentage of “` stayed the same between “` and “`
21 the percentage remainede steady at“`
22 the percentage of “`is sightly large than that of.
23 there is not a great deal of differece between “`and “`
24 the graphs show a three fold increase in the number of “`
25 “`decreased year by year while “`increased steadily.
26 there is an upward trend in the number of “`
27 a considerable increase occurred from “`to “`
28 from “`to “`the rate of decrease slow down.
29 from this year on,there was a gradual declinel reduction in the
“`reaching a figure of.
30 be similar to “`be the same as
31 there are a lot similarities between “`and “`
32 the difference between X and Y lies in “`
雅思学术性写作考试中Task 1 考查考生解释,说明信息的能力,这些信息通常体现在图解,表格和插图中,这一部分的模式化程度更高一些。下类50个句式是雅思留学类考生需要背诵的最最基础的句子。请同学们自己背诵。在写作小作文的时候,也可以作为参考材料。
1. the table illustrates the changes in the number of…over the period from…to…
该表格描述了在…年之…年间…数量的变化。
2. the bar chart illustrates that… 该柱状图展示了…
3. the graph provides some interesting data regarding…
该图为我们提供了有关…有趣数据。
4. the diagram shows (that)… 该图向我们展示了…
5. the pie graph depicts (that)…. 该圆形图揭示了…
6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of…
这个曲线图描述了…的趋势。
7. the figures/statistics show (that)… 数据(字)表明…
8. the tree diagram reveals how…
该树型图向我们揭示了如何…
9. the data/statistics show (that)…
该数据(字)可以这样理解…
10. the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that…
这些数据资料令我们得出结论…
11. as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table…
如图所示…
12. according to the chart/figures… 根据这些表(数字)…
13. as is shown in the table… 如表格所示…
14. as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in…
从图中可以看出,…发生了巨大变化。
15. from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly that…or it is clear/apparent from the chart that…
从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到…
16. this is a graph which illustrates…
这个图表向我们展示了…
17. this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from…to…
该表格描述了…年到…年间a与b的比例关系。
18. the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in…
该图以圆形图形式描述了…总的趋势。
19. this is a column chart showing… 这是个柱型图,描述了…
20. as can be seen from the graph, the two curves show the fluctuation of…
如图所示,两条曲线描述了…的波动情况。
21. over the period from…to…the…remained level.
在…至…期间,…基本不变。
22. in the year between…and… 在…年到…期间…
23. in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998…
1995年至1998三年里…
24. from then on/from this time onwards… 从那时起…
25. the number of…remained steady/stable from (month/year) to (month/year).
…月(年)至…月(年)…的数量基本不变。
26. the number sharply went up to… 数字急剧上升至…
27. the percentage of…stayed the same between…and…
…至…期间…的比率维持不变。
28. the figures peaked at…in(month/year)
…的数目在…月(年)达到顶点,为…
29. the percentage remained steady at… 比率维持在…
30. the percentage of…is slightly larger/smaller than that of…
…的比例比…的比例略高(低)。
31. there is not a great deal of difference between…and…
…与…的区别不大。
32. the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of…
该图表表明…的数目增长了三倍。
33. ..decreased year by year while…increased steadily.
…逐年减少,而…逐步上升。
……
太多啦,你给个邮箱,我发给你吧!

你好,为你准备了2012年10月20日的雅思写作范文,供参考,以拓宽自己的写作思路。
Nowadays it is more convenient and easier for people to travel to other countries, is it development a positive or negative effect
参考范文:
Never before was travelling to alien countries so convenient and popular as in this century. This phenomenon is partially attributed to improved technology and cheap flight tickets. Facing this travel frenzy, some are concerned that it will bring about too many side effects whilst others insist that is should be supported and maintained.
Admittedly, cross-border travel has more downsides than one. Firstly, the carbon dioxide planes emitted is reported to be disproportionately more than that emitted by other transportation means. The carbon dioxide will lead to ozone layer thinning and thereby increase the probability of people contracting skin cancer. Moreover, being easier and more convenient to travel among countries means that some criminals could flee to other countries after committing hideous crime. This will pose a threat to local security and community stability.
However, the downsides cannot overshadow its upsides. For starters, travelling around the world with more ease could expand individuals’ horizons and stimulate their love of life and they will be more productive at work in the future. Moreover, companies could visit foreign markets more conveniently than before and as a result, they could locate potential target market and sell goods there or buy materials from there if the price is competitively enough. If a company could flourish this way, employees will benefit and the society in which companies are operating will be more stable and harmonies. Last but not least, if more and more people are afforded opportunities to go to other countries, there will be less misunderstanding and more respect among countries. All these will contribute to a diverse but harmonious culture.
To sum up, despite the numerous drawbacks mentioned above, travelling to other countries with more convenience and ease is, by and large, a positive development.

雅思大作文

因为我并非教育界人士,所以无法给你评分,但可以替你更正文章的错漏,希望会对你有所帮助。
Some people think that increasing business and
cultural contacts have a positive influence, and others think that it has a negative
effect to national identities. What is your opinion
正文:
I would admit (要加that) the contact between different
countries have risen rapidly, and whether it (加is) a good news for our(是us) human beings is
under discussion for it is really a complicated and significant problem in the coming
wave of globalization.
With the trend of frequently connect to each
other, the world exposed (a quiet应该是: quite a) new atmosphere for business or cultural development.
In this condition, countries show their own advantages and endeavor to make more
profits. As a result, (去掉a) work can be separate into small pieces(改为lots会更好, for example, we
will found a computer which (the) keyboard is是(was) made in China,
screen is(是was) made in Japan and with its Germany battery.
Without doubt, globalization seems play(是playing) a remarkable
role in the culture evolution, although we recognize that different nations possess
its(是their) particular culture(s), which anthropologists indicated “local knowledge”, we could
not deny (加that) it gives the harsh impacts to those developing countries.
The acculturation among countries and nations
may lead the (develop of cultural 应该是: development of culture 或 cultural development) into a new degree which (加would) board(是boarden) the understanding
of human, society and nature, and those views in special aspects other than domestic
scholars or even totally opposite theories make great controversies in scholars
is better to enrich the knowledge.
One big point we should not neglect is that
the unequal position between developed countries and developing counties, as I have
concerned, globalization definitely a harsh impact, which meant they should make
a proper balance in learning from others and inherent (加their) own traditions. Therefore
the national identities seem less referred, and what’s more, people are willing
to accept modern civilization and feel shame about our(改为their own) culture. Such as todays
China, a lot of teenagers abandoned those 5,000 years history and culture carelessly.
We are not living in a(an) isolated island and
theres no chance go(going) back into(要改为: to) thousand years ago when people just live in one
place (all 要改为: their entire) lifespan. After all, when facing (加with) the positive (changes benefits 要改为: benefit of changes) from the
intimate(intimately) associated with other communities worldwide, we wont forget our nationality and heritage from the(our) ancestors.

应该能得5.5左右。原因:1. 个人观点不明晰。只是在论述过程中体现了自己的一些论调。2. 论据不充分。没有具体地解释产生自己观点的原因。3. 汉语思维严重。4. 语法错误和词句运用错误严重。5. 分段不合理。通常雅思大作文分四段。
希望帮您

说实话,一看就是模板,好像还是十天里的,我想说如果你想拿6分或者更高,最好不要用模板,这是一个高手教我的,我让她给改了几篇文章,她提醒了我这一点,最后我改过来了,总算作文过了呵呵。
模板意味不能太浓,不然有些考官很反感的,就算你的句子还好,估计也拿不到6分,我没那么厉害,光从第一段是评不出你的水平的,但是我看到你的第一段我觉得是低于6分的,因为你用的是模板,词汇也不是很高级,所以~~~~~
个人觉得作文首先结构要清晰,这个你可以参考十天,我的意思是你可以按他的结构先写双方观点再提出自己观点,但是不要用那些句子,也就是在大结构确定的情况下你可以用不同的思路或者说小结构写你的文章,而且很多高手第一段也就是背景段是写的很长的,完全不是10天所谓1+1+2+1这种,当然前提是你的大思路大框架不能散,你的构架必须是逻辑性很强,很严密的。

推荐一本雅思写作范文书

 

1.《最简化雅思写作》

 

 

本书共分10个部分。

前3个部分是雅思考试的一些基本常识,现在流行的一些错误的对待雅思考试的观念和做法等,都在这3个部分里拨乱反正;第4部分是雅思考试的词汇和语法;第5部分是雅思写作考试三种作文的模板;第6部分是30篇高分范文及点评;第7部分是高级写作技巧讲解;第8和第9部分是A类、G类的Task1;最后一个部分是附录。

 

评价:这本书总体来讲对于基础差的烤鸭更有帮助意义,能让你对雅思写作有一个大的概念,但还不足以你突破提升,通过不断练习形成适合自己的写作思路。

适合人群:基础较差或初学者

推荐指数:★★★

 

2.《雅思八分万能作文》

 

 

书中大部分英文写作内容都是雅思考官AlannahFitzgerald亲自主笔并严格审核的,完全从剑桥考试委员会的最新要求出发,为考生提供最权威的示范文章,并且每篇范文都给出了详细的阐释。

 

包括10篇必考雅思写作真题版本预测,30篇雅思考官Alannah主笔的雅思常见议论文考试题目范本。15篇雅思考官Alannah主笔的雅思常见图表作文考试题目范本。

 

评价:这本书的选材、题目等极力贴近雅思真题,读起来提升还是很明显的,不过本来目的是为了帮助读者举一反三,高效提升写作能力,但结果是很多模板被用烂了,题材也有些过时,学起来也比较难,没有一定的功底最好不要乱学。

适合人群:基础在6分左右,想拿7分的烤鸭

推荐指数:★★★★

 

3.《十天突破雅思写作》

 

 

这本书的江湖地位不用多说。基本一提到雅思写作,就必会有人推荐此书,简直就是《圣经》一般的地位。书中中的语法“七宗罪”、“2类共300多个高频词汇”、“34个基础句型”和“43个高分句型”成为了雅思学生的应试法宝。

 

本书的编排轻松,按天划分,帮助考生合理安排复习计划。十天的复习安排实际上是十个重要的主题。有助于学生合理分配时间。富有创造性地总结出了帮助中国考生突破IELTS写作瓶颈所需的全部应试技巧,并用地道英语对大量语言点进行了深入讲解。

 

 

评价:书很不错,不愧是经典。里面不是一味的甩大词,更多是为了准确流畅的运用,从根本上解决烤鸭的表达能力,搭建你写作的框架和大纲,任何阶段的烤鸭看过之后都能获益匪浅(不管你是零基础,还是老思机),趣味性比较强,但书的思路和结构比较乱,另外因为书过于经典,已经被过度使用,套模板严重,还有一个缺点就是,严重标题党,十天根本不够看!!

适合人群:所有阶段的烤鸭

推荐指数:★★★★★

 

4.《顾家北手把手教你雅思写作》

 

 

本书旨在帮助考生尽快找到写作角度、正确审题、快速拓展思路、正确下笔、严密展开逻辑论证。全书包括四章:第一章为雅思写作完整解答,能够帮助考生迅速熟悉雅思写作,制定正确的复习计划;第二章为雅思写作必备语法知识,能够帮助考生迅速完成遣词造句的过程;第三章为大作文攻略,针对雅思最容易出现的作文题目,讲述各种写作技法;第四章为小作文攻略,附录中补充了实效的词汇和句型,是雅思写作必备基础。

 

评价:这本书风格很朴实,但又逻辑缜密,不是教你背单词,不是让你套模板,逐条分析雅思作文容易出现的错误,针对这些错误入手,教给你一些不一样的写作思路,开拓你的思维,唯一的缺点可能就是范文缺少一些推理。

适合人群:雅思基础不错,或6分以上

推荐指数:★★★★★

 

5.Writing for IELTS(Collins)

 

 

Writing for IELTS(Collins)是雅思写作原版书籍,如果你的写作阻碍了你在雅思考试中想要获得的分数 ,。Writing for IELTS(Collins)可以帮助你。 柯林斯雅思写作专为计划参加学术雅思考试的英语学习者而设,以证明他们在大学里具备有效的英语交流能力。

 

评价:书中全是习题,内容很丰富。虽说是Ielts写作书,但跟应该说是广泛意义上的写作基础书籍,还是很适合大多数烤鸭看的,如果硬说缺点,大概就是全英文的,而且没有从中国考生的角度去考虑一些问题,更代表官方的一种态度。

 

适用人群:成绩在5-5.5分,想要拿6.5-7分的烤鸭

推荐指数:★★★★

 

6.《Writing Academic English》

 

 

这本书并不是专门为雅思考生写的一本书,但对于雅思考生来说,帮助也绝对不容小觑。雅思的大作文实际上就是学术写作,而该本书教的就是学术英语,学术英语主要应用于考试、课堂学术讨论,演讲,辩论,采访,各种presentation等。特别对于留学生来说,以后你将时常与之打交道。

 

该书针对学术写作进行了全方位的讲解——结构、逻辑、上下文衔接的问题也解释的很清楚,特别适合雅思托福考试想考高分的人。

 

评价:里面有大量学术例子,读完之后收获绝对不小,阅读该书不要囫囵吞枣,可以借助思维导图不断完善你的思路,也可以当做你以后写作材料的主要来源之一。

适用人群:全英文,主要适用于高阶段的所有烤鸭

推荐指数:★★★★★

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